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Anon Replies - Chapter 31

So here are the replies for the anon reviews. JamaicanGurl - I'm glad you're enjoying the story and my writing style. When it comes to spelling patois, I think that can be up for some debate, lol. I would actually spell it 'yahdies' [as would my friends but we're second gen. lol] but I said yardies because I think that would be easier to figure out what it means since I am writing for a mixed audience, lol, and yard is clearly stated while 'yahd' or 'yaad' would be confusing for people not in the country. And I said 'wind' because you can wind up a toy and it's a twisting motion so it's easy to connect it to the action they're doing with their hips, lol. I know I didn't update before Christmas but I hope you like the latest chapter! Thanks for the review :) quotata (since you have PM disabled) - I'm glad you liked the conversation with Sean, that was one of the parts I was having difficulty with since there'

Chapter 32

Chapter 32 is finally up. Anon reviews will be up on the blog later this week/early next week. I hope you like the chapter :)

Chapter update

I know some of you are worried that I'm not going to finish but I am working on it. School officially started last week so I wanted to get the chapter done by this weekend but the transition is killing me. At some point in time, I took a scene that should've happened earlier out/altered it and now a scene I need to write for this chapter isn't working because its set up is built on what should've happened in the removed scene. I think I've figured out how to fix it but we'll see if I'm able to get it out this week as planned since third week [of school] is when everything will start to really pick up. Also, someone asked when we'll be seeing a happier Judi... not for a while. Her house of cards is tumbling and things are coming to light that she either has chosen to ignore or didn't about are coming to light.

Happy New Year!!

I hope everyone had a great night last night and that this year is better than last's. I'm aiming to have IWOAK32 up sometime this week since once again I scrapped a few openings and had to start fresh. What makes it frustrating is that the openings are like 3000 words, I feel like I've got everything going and then boom, stalled. I don't really have any solid goals at the moment since I've been sucking at actually achieving them, lol, but what are your goals/resolutions/wishes for the new year? I also want to thank you guys for the support over the past few years and for sticking with me, it's much appreciated <3333