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Chapter 32 Anon Review Replies

NOTE: For some reason, fp disabled all of my alerts so I'm guessing they probably did that for a few other people as well. If you didn't receive an alert for chapter 33, double check your alert settings. IWOAK 33 quotata : since I can't respond via fp, I meant that he said fine quietly when he told her mother a 'quiet fine', lol. Sorry for the confusion. IWOAK32 wateva : Thanks :) Lily : Considering the length of my chapters, it's quite a feat to read the majority of the story on a cell, lol. I have no intention of dropping this story, it's about 3 chapters from the end and I will finish it even if it's taking me forever. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, thanks for the review! Grumpirah : To them Chris is their actual blood, and so they take his side even though he has a history of being wrong. Not all of them, mind you, but enough to make it frustrating. Thanks for the review! i guess: I'm not sure what you mean by you were ...

Update Tonight

IWOAK 33 I decided to just post the first half of chapter 33 since it's about 5K and it's a decent chapter, and what with work who knows when I'll be able to actually get the second half typed up and posted and I already missed posting for April. So, review replies for 32 will be a bit late in coming as I have a family get together tonight but I hope you guys like the chapter! WDC So, I started cleaning this bad boy up and it started to turn into a full blown rewrite and I'm liking it quite a bit better. I'm contemplating entering it into a couple of contests to see how it fares and then querying agents OR going straight epub with the cleaned up version. But if I go epub I want it to be as professional as possible, so cover art, no errors grammar or continuity etc.  and since we all know how I am with time management that might be a bit of a bust. Oh vell. Hope everything is good with you guys!