Scribbles and Updates

IWOAK 33 I decided to just post the first half of chapter 33 since it's about 5K and it's a decent chapter, and what with work who knows when I'll be able to actually get the second half typed up and posted and I already missed posting for April. So, review replies for 32 will be a bit late in coming as I have a family get together tonight but I hope you guys like the chapter! WDC So, I started cleaning this bad boy up and it started to turn into a full blown rewrite and I'm liking it quite a bit better. I'm contemplating entering it into a couple of contests to see how it fares and then querying agents OR going straight epub with the cleaned up version. But if I go epub I want it to be as professional as possible, so cover art, no errors grammar or continuity etc.  and since we all know how I am with time management that might be a bit of a bust. Oh vell. Hope everything is good with you guys!

Hey all, I know, I went off grid for a while but I'm still here. Started my internship three weeks ago and I've been commuting/working/commuting/sleeping. Lol. I have been writing on the commute though, it's an hour twenty both ways not counting the fifteen minute walk to and from the bus stop and then to and from my work so when I'm awake enough I'm putting in work, it's just finding the time to actually type it up. internship ends this Friday [ please let me get hired, please, please, please ] and there's no guarantee I'll get kept so there's that. Of course, it's my little brother's birthday tomorrow as well as a friend of mines so this weekend will probably be celebrating with them. Um, what else. Oh, someone is on fictionpress asking to buy people's copyright. If this happens to you say no. It might be a scam, it might not, but considering it's different user names each time [so far] and there's no information about w...

So I'm about halfway finished 33, I'm aiming to have it finished fairly soon but it's a heavy chapter on all fronts. It's looking like it'll be longer than I intended unless I go off-scene with some things or do flashbacks, and I'm not sure since I feel both AJ and Jared deserve full screen time. We shall see how it works when I finish writing it out. I wanted to have a teaser or cut scene to post but I couldn't find anything that wasn't spoilerish for later on so I thought I'd give you guys the beginning of the chapter. End of chapter 32 she confronts her parents about knowing about  Jared and this continues directly from there.   Do not click if you want to read it all in one go when I actually post on fp. This is about two and a half pages of what will be [unless I get stuck] in the final draft.

Chapter 32 is finally up. Anon reviews will be up on the blog later this week/early next week. I hope you like the chapter :)