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update delay

Due to a recent loss in the family and drama that has popped up recently I won't be able to update IWOAK by the end of this month/beginning of July. I'm hoping the shit storm will pass relatively soon and I can get the next chapter out mid-July.

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It Was Only A Kiss Stalled. I have about 500 words written but it doesn't feel right for an opening. I don't know if I should jump a head a few days and give her a chance to gain control or go right into her confrontation with her parents and even that is iffy since her dynamic with her parents makes her reactions feel iffy. I'm going to try and write a different scene and then come back to the opening and hopefully by then I'll have figured out what's wrong and won't have to do another 10k scrapping session before it comes out right. Choices Second part of AJ's POV is coming along nicely. I considered doing it in chronological order but honestly I'm pretty much writing his parts as they come to me and since it's a series of one-shots/his memories each scene is strong enough to stand on its own if you've read the main story (I think). When it's finished I'll post it on here first and see what you guys think. Fall For Your Type M...

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IWOAK 28 quotata: I'm glad you enjoyed it and we'll be learning more about her brother and that situation. [I know you were logged in but apparently review replies go to your PM now and yours is disabled]. Sera: Glad you liked the chapter! And the Labyrinth themed room was a lot of fun for me to write even if I do have to tone it down when I edit it, lol. A lot of people forgot about Anita and the blackmail thing. I'm glad you liked the chapter :) Grumpirah: I think a lot of people would like them to be dealt with, lol, no promises on my part since although I have the rest of the story plotted out I haven't really placed them into it. Well Carmen a bit, but not Anita. I'll definitely try and fix that but no promises. And Vince had his reasons as did AJ even though it's up to you whether you think they were justified.  We will be seeing more of Jared and get to see some of his thoughts on the matter. Thanks for the review :) gp: yeah, Anita gets no lo...