Chapter 31

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Chapter 31 has been posted for any of my readers who don't get alerts. Hope you like and anon review replies will be posted soon.

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  1. AnonymousNovember 10, 2011 at 3:35 PM

    AHHHAAHH !!!!!

    I know I haven't been getting the 411 on things lately, I'm always late; the real world got me stressed. But I def. enjoyed Chap 31. The real is coming out. I just need AJ to step up his game && its so true what Judi said, his pride && ego is messing it up for him. Judi's fam needs to tell her the real scope on things. Maybe then she can prob develop a relationship with Jared.

    Keep me posted.

    Izzy O_o

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  2. AnonymousNovember 11, 2011 at 2:54 PM

    OMG!! Luckily i checked on here, didn't get a notification that you'd updated. But, this chapter was amazing! So gut wrenching at the end with Judith telling it like it is...hope that AJ realises how much his pride and reputation is costing him! Loving the story and can't wait for your next update, hopefully soon?? :D Great work

    2madaboutbooks

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  3. AnonymousNovember 12, 2011 at 4:44 PM

    are u frm a jamaican descent?

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  4. JammiNovember 15, 2011 at 8:48 PM

    @Izzy - Real life stays keeping folks stressed. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and yeah Judi's rose coloured glasses have been taken off, now she needs to open her eyes a bit more and look at her family and Jared and work that out, regardless of whether it's comfortable or not.

    @2madaboutbooks - hopefully. I'm aiming for December, but no promises. I'm glad you like it! And yeah, AJ needs to realise that Judi can't be the only person making compromises, it's not fair to her.

    @Anon, yup both of my parents are Jamaican. My mom is from Kingston and my dad is from Portmore (or Port Moore? Never sure how to spell that one). They came up here 25 years ago give or take a few year.

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  5. AnonymousNovember 17, 2011 at 4:57 PM

    LOL ITS PORTMORE. IM ONLY ASKIN CUZ IM JAMAICAN N I NOTICE U INCORPORATED A BIT OF PATIOS IN UR BK! LUV LUV LUV IT!

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